Originally posted on Dan Alatorre – AUTHOR: Using my unreleased manuscript An Angel On Her Shoulder, I am showing you my techniques for reworking a story into a more readable, more enjoyable piece. It’s 45+ lessons in about 45 days. (To start at Chapter 1, click HERE.) To view it best, bring up the two versions…

via 3 Tips For WRITING A Roller Coaster — Don Massenzio’s Blog

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